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托福写作模板:搬去新地方会失去老朋友吗

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  2016年托福写作真题题目:

  2016年3月26日托福独立写作题目

  Agree or disagree:it is often not a good city to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose touch with old friends.

  真题重现

  It is not a good thing to move to a new cityor country because we will lose old friends.

  2016年3月26日托福独立写作解析

  该题目从题型分类上来讲,不属于常见题型(绝对型、对比型、建议型),其最显著的特征是题目本身带有一个因果关系:因为会失去老朋友,所以搬到一个新地方不是一件好的事情。严格来讲,如果从同意的角度来写,思路可能会受到题目的限制,即只能想到从失去老朋友这个角度来论证搬去新地方不好。所以这种题目从不同意的角度更容易写出逻辑严谨,内容丰富的文章。下面的范文采取不同意的立场,主体段第一段写,搬去新地方不见得会失去老朋友,因为通讯工具日益发达;第二个主体段写,就算老朋友有些疏远,也不能因此断定搬去新地方不好,反而可以开始一段新生活、了解新的文化、结交新的朋友。

  托福写作范文参考:

  2016年3月26日托福独立写作范文

  As the technology of public transportation keeps advancing, more citizens can choose to dwell in the cities that are beneficial to their own development. Inevitably, there occurs a controversy whether moving to a new city or country will lead to the rupture of relationship among friends. From my perspective, I think the statement is not sensible.

  Firstly, moving to a new country or city will not result in the loss of old friends. To be more specific, the maintenance of friendship doesn’t lie in how far they live with each other and the development of technology has diversified the ways of interacting with friends. The invention of cellphones break the shackles caused by distance and overseas students can choose to communicate with their family members and friends through a variety of Apps like WeChat that makes video calls possible. Except for that, by looking at the pictures popping up all over the social media like Facebook, people can easily capture what is happening to their friends. For instance, my friend Selina took selfie in the Sydney Opera House a week ago and I would learn that she was having fun in the Australia with her picture posted on the Instagram. Therefore, a wide range of advanced electronic gadgets can be used to sustain friendship.

  Moreover, instead of losing old friends, city migrants can even enlarge their social circles and achieve more success. Restricted in a city for a long period, people may be trapped in a situation that would block their development and they can gain refreshing experience while immigrating to a new city. My friend of Mine named Michael served as a Market Analyst in a renewed company in Beijing. However, he couldn’t see any progress in recent years and then an opportunity comes out. Because of his five-year working experience, a foreign trade cooperation tried to recruit him as the Market Analyst because the firm was planning to start a new program. Then he grasped the chance and earn a challenging life that he likes even though he was required to work in Shanghai. Our relationship have not experienced any interruption and his strong ability of being adapted to the new environment helps him to make lots of new friends. Accordingly, moving to a new city can, occasionally, help to break the deadlock in our professions.

  Admittedly, it can be sensible that friends can be estranged owing to the long distance with each other. Specifically speaking, the chances to meet with each other will be limited a lot. However, as I just put, for one thing, people can talk with each other through various social network software. For another thing, the distance between cities is not a problem anymore since there have been many public transportation tools like the high-speed trains and airplanes that will lead us to anyplace we try to go in a very short period.

  In a word, moving to a new city or a new country is good choice under some circumstance. Besides, the highly developed technology can help to strengthen the relations with our friends and the possibilities of living a different life and achieving success can both explain why I stand by the statement that it is a good thing to move.


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