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雅思写作:Task1柱状图考官范文(16)

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  The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Ages and Genders in USA.

  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  Sample Answer:

  The given chart shows data on the number of US people who got heart attach dividing in to three age groups. As is observed from the given information, men had more heart attack rate than female and both men and women over 65 years old had heart attack than younger age groups.

  Men had more heart attach rate than woman in all age groups. Firstly, 123 thousand men got heart attack compared to the 3 thousand female who fall under the 29 to 44 age group. Again, among the 45 to 64 years group, more than 400 thousand men got heart attack which was almost three times higher than the female of this age group. Finally, US people over 65 years old suffered from heart attack than other two age groups and that exceeded 300 thousand for female and 400 thousand for men. Women in 65+ age group suffered from heart attach significantly more than other age groups.

  In conclusion, more American male suffered from heart attach than women and this rate is highest among the people over 65 years old.


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