A trip to Hong Kong
Last weekend, I travelled in Hong Kong. Hong Kong is a very beautiful modern city, it’s to the south of Guangdong. There are many tall buildings and wonderful places to visit, such as: Victorian Park(维多利亚公园), Disneyland park(迪士尼乐园). What I like best is to visit the Ocean Park(海洋公园). The Ocean Park is the biggest recreation center(休闲中心) in the southeast of Asia(东南亚), each year many people go there to pay a visit. We saw many performances by the dolphins and the whales. The performances were very exciting and the animals were very lovely. We really had a good time in Hong Kong.
教师点评: 小作者向我们介绍了香港的著名的旅游景点,并且较详细地介绍了海洋公园的规模和动物的精彩表演.文章简洁朴实,用词恰当,不愧为一篇佳作.